Just a Thought
Some things are left unsaid
While some said but left unheard
Some unreal wishes r attained
But some real wishes look so unattainable
Some flowers bloom to be loved
While some are left to wither in the cold
Some things planned; fail miserably
While unplanned business works wonders
The people you love leave you and go sooner than expected
And the people who don’t know you exist live on
Many say believe in yourself
and you will succeed;
I believe in myself
But unfortunately success doesn’t.
Sipping coffee under the sheet of glowing stars
I wonder what this life has in store for me
They say some things happen for the best
It’s the “best” part that I don’t understand.
Some things are left unsaid
While some said but left unheard
Some unreal wishes r attained
But some real wishes look so unattainable
Some flowers bloom to be loved
While some are left to wither in the cold
Some things planned; fail miserably
While unplanned business works wonders
The people you love leave you and go sooner than expected
And the people who don’t know you exist live on
Many say believe in yourself
and you will succeed;
I believe in myself
But unfortunately success doesn’t.
Sipping coffee under the sheet of glowing stars
I wonder what this life has in store for me
They say some things happen for the best
It’s the “best” part that I don’t understand.
12 comments:
wow...sammie...deep deep poetry!...very nostalgic...good work :D
very very deep stuff :D and cool at the same time :D
wow!!! Awesome Mana... sheeshhh ther were numerous pars in the poem that I could feel what u were writing :O ... very intense and expressive!!! :D
beautiful!! :D
ok..I wanna hug u now..lol..uni tomo..no runnin away..lol
mwah! :)
The four letter word called 'Life' had been converted into a a poem. Well explained. :)
Waiting for more samoosa :D
nice 1 samzzzzz...
really nice...
so true!
Its ruly awesome Twinniee!
Gosh...its an inspiration for me to start scribbling few masterpieces meself ;] :P
Like others say... Its deep to the core and it comes out naturally from a coffee freak figuring how life is! :P
i jus wonder u really did it... lol u improved alot lot lot lot lot vit ur poetry... gud goin.. keep it up.. wonderful piece of art
wow gud work there...:)
aww thank you so much..well i guess its one of those poems that anyone can identify to :)
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